2.      Outline the paper.  Is this organization effective or confusing? Why?
 
 
 
 
 

3.      Find one example where the author underused or poorly analyzed his/her evidence.  Label
   this #4.  Suggest 2 ways the author could analyze this evidence.
 
 
 
 
 

4.      Is each paragraph funneled?  Find 3 paragraphs that do not begin general and move
   toward specifics.  Label these #6.  Explain how the author could improve this paragraph
   (especially, does the paragraph need an example?)  Make some suggestions.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

5.      Find three places where the author’s logic is unclear (i.e. writer-based prose).  Label these
   #5.  Restate exactly what the text says (errors and all).  What do you think the author meant
   to say?
      One:
 
 
 

      Two:
 
 
 

      Three
 
 
 

6.      Find 3 places where the author has restated another author’s argument.  Label these #3.
   Describe how the author uses and presents this information.
   One:
 
 
 

   Two:
 
 
 

   Three:
 
 
 

7.      Specifically, what should the author’s priorities be in revising the paper?